Thursday, August 7, 2008

AN INCREDIBLE WOMAN!!

I was thinking today about GOD'S greatest creation, a WOMAN!! I just wanted to express my views on this fabulous gift that GOD gave man to unwrap when he's mature enough to handle it. I was fortunate enough to be raised in a house with 5 lovely women,so needless to say I have witnessed some things, the good, the bad and the ugly!! Now I am not saying I'm an expert but I did pay close attention; and the lessons I learned from the women in my home growing up prepared me for the man I would become.Yes that's right I learned how to be a man from a house full of women. No they didn't show me how to start a fire by rubbing 2 sticks together, but they did teach me the proper way to touch my woman to make her feel like she's on fire. My home was where my training of how to respect, cherish, love,and understand a woman began. So I feel I know a thing or two about a woman,I know enough to know that alot of women are forgetting that they are gifts from GOD. Some think there really expensive gifts because they shine bright after they polish the dust off, but like my grandmother says"everything that glitters ain't gold" or some feel there worthless without knowing beyond the look of a gift you may find it to be priceless; and to that I would say this, check ya packaging!! If your box is thrown together and ya wrapping is not pleasing to the eye and your ribbon is so loose it only takes one pull to reveal your gift; then you need to tighten up..place your gift in a box big enough to hold your many qualities,wrap your gift in the finest eye catching wrapping paper you can find,tie it up tight with the strongest ribbon available..Then when you feel like the gift GOD created you to be is being properly displayed take out your soul searching pen and put a name on it!! That way you choose who gets to receive your gift. And I'm not talking about no man's name I'm talking about the qualities you want embracing your gift.Your card should read like this... This gift belongs to the Man who is not afraid of a woman's strength,not intimidated by her thoughts,not jealous of her beauty, A man who knows that a Woman's scent alone can make the coldest man feel warm inside, A man who understands and respects the power that is held by a woman for being GOD'S precious gift. From the deepness of her love, through the depths of her soul,to the kiss off the tip of her lips, from the swing of her hips, to the mystery between her thighs, to the strength of her pose,the power between her toes,to the twinkle that's in her eyes, from the arch of her back,to the nape of her neck, to all the goodness she has wrapped inside! See that's only 5% of what makes up a woman, do you know how powerful a woman is when she decides to showcase a 100% of herself at all times?! "oooooowweee..that is a sexy thang" If a woman was bottled water it wouldn't be any ice bergs left.lol because men would drink the earth dry(bone dry)..lol But seriously there is nothing like a strong woman, I'm talking confident, beautiful,educated, knows her self worth and don't need no damn man justifying it for her,she can even be conceited; hell why not walk around with your head up it might force a man to look you in the face!! Don't be afraid to express your views, your opinions, show your intelligence, embrace your motherhood, or flaunt your beauty....let it out PLEASE!! The world needs that, hell I need that. If you understand and believe in the fact that you are truly God's greatest gift and check ya packaging from time to time..lol The next time you walk through a group of men they'll turn to each other and say now that is one incredible WOMAN!! thanx for reading....1ne!!...Hazel Luciano!!

15 comments:

Sweetin said...

Baby, baby, baby!!! You hit a homerun with this piece. Genius, just pure genius!!!

cRiS10 said...

That is absolutely amazing. i will be quoting you on this one.

-christen

Unknown said...

I like this....but...um...I need to write this one from a different perspective. Thanks for the inspiration!

Anonymous said...

Wow... To take those thoughts and that perspective and put it into such beautiful words like that really makes my heart flutter. To think that there is a man out here in this world that actually thinks with his mind and soul but not his body is incredible. Your thoughts give off such a positive energy that I know that any negative thoughts just repels off of you. You know the saying, " If you build it, they will come", keep on writing from your soul and we will read, lol....
You should really think about writing professionally...

~~~Anonymous~~~

Anonymous said...

Alright cousin'....You wanted to know my thoughts.. you know I am long winded... I am feelin' it. I believe that since this message is coming from a strong male figure these young (and even older) women would take a better listen to this than if the message came from another woman.. Women tell other women every day how they should carry themselves to attract the right man... BUT when it comes from the man... it is a different story. We do need to tighten up our ribbons.. hook up our wrapping.. you got that.. but we all need to check ourselves and do better, inside and out. From you it isn't considered "HATIN'" .. but a positive, insightful and up lifting message.. though a true woman doesn't "hate" on anyone... a true woman builds up whomever is in listening range..true women believe in creating not destroying..women are truly a gift from GOD! And as it is written..He who finds a wife finds a good thing...

babygirlt said...

Thats something serious there. I really like that one there. God really gave you a special gift cause you definitely speak from the heart. You know what you doing when you write. Love it!!

babygirlt said...

Wonderful just simply wonderful. I love it. God gave you that gift to write like you do and you do a beautiful job at it. Love ya!!

Anonymous said...

Well well well, you hit a simi-home run if that makes since. It takes a true man to know a true WOMAN. You describe some GIRLS in you blog. I must say that you did define A true WOMAN! though. So we know that there are some out there. BUT are there true MEN out there to recognize! NO!. There are some halfs....lol. Believe it or not (Boyz) make women like they are. To say the least, men are undecided about thereselves, which gives off intense mix signals to the (good) females that do want something in life. Anyway I will stop there. I just ask women to keep the guard up and don't let them down to the fake niccas out here. Play there game and just protect the heart. It will give you something to do until you find that right one. As long as the heart is protected, so are you. WE ARE THA BEAST, BEST, AND BEKNOWN. All we ask is to be acknowledged, not hidden.

Thanks for Blog, it truley defines ME any way...lol

Smoochezz 2 U and 2! thumbs up Hazel.

Anonymous said...

With insight, passion and poise Mr. Luciano has done it again. but we shouldn't expect any less! To have a MAN see a WOMAN for the gift she truely is and be able to express it that way is a BEAUTIFUL thing. Takes a strong man to understand and RESPECT the complex strength of a womans heart. But as women and men our education/work is continuous...so ROLL ON!! and lets not forget...yes God created man first, but He knew that in order to be fulfilled in LYFE he needed WOMAN. A beautiful coexistence to "unwrap"

Anonymous said...

That's what Im talking about bruh! Someone had to kick that knowledge. As for me,("I ain't nice like boss",lol) I hope all the women who read this truly get the message. Time for folks to awaken out of this recession refreshed to a spiritual boom. Keep em coming

Unknown said...

This was absolutely beautiful. I never knew a man could talk from his heart like this.

DivaDorna said...

AMEN & HALLEJAH!! I want to wallpaper my daughter's room with this posting! This generation of young women have lost their self-esteem and don't appreciate their worthiness as the gift they are to mankind.

As for myself, I have a pretty healthy self-respect but after reading this, I'm putting men on notice!! I'm going to be strutting (actually sashaying) in a manner that will all but shout "A GIFT ONLY TO BE OPENED BY A REAL MAN!!"

Feel free to take your message on the road, my brother. There are too many men, young and old, who haven't figured this one out yet!! I'm just shaking my head as I re-read and saying DAMN!!! Keep writing!! You have a new fan!!

Anonymous said...

Well said. Keep writin', this message is a great one for the young ladies out there referring to themselves in less than flaterring terms. We get what we put out therer or what we demand. Ladies, take heed, the words are true. Know your worth and walk it out. If you don't know your worth, look in the mirror and love yourself, pray to God for that confidence. Be strong, be powerful, be real!

Anonymous said...

Wow what can I say....I'm not surprised however I have your verbal gift still on a cd, you impressed me then & ya still impressing me now. Your words are not just poems or words on paper but insights into the human condition that we all can relate to. Keep it up J, keep it going!...~1 luv~

mamaj said...

well baby boy i see u still have that wonderful gift,not everyone can take feelings or views and make poetry out of them .But you have a way !!! i love you mamaj